nox
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Post by nox on Dec 2, 2009 19:03:36 GMT -5
Nox (otchoko) Grimm Age: 14 Gender: male Race: devil (but born on earth) Appearance: Short, thin and lanky, he has a pointed chin, angled red eyes, and pale grayish skin. As per his race he has a long red tail. power persuassion (people who hear him talk are likely to listen to his demands) but it wears him out very quickly personailty very observant, joking, kind but stubborn especially in debates or arguements. His biggest fear is to be left behind or hated (but he would never tell anyone that) His biggest motivation is "because its fun"
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Post by Krai on Dec 5, 2009 22:56:28 GMT -5
Little piece of advice: you may want to add more detail, like on personality. Maybe a little section on history. Of course, these are merely suggestions.
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